Wednesday, April 2, 2008

The number......(s.o.s) (_._)!



Once upon a time, there’s one boy name Michael. He lived with his sister on his grand mom house. Last year he was dead on AIS school. When the students were stay in the school at night. They heard some strange noises. Then they started to find out what happen. Then students became more frighten so they call their parent. But there’s no signal form there phone, but they could get off the school. The next day, when the high school student told the principal about that but the principal did not believe. Suddenly the principal heard that strange noise so now he believed. So the principal were retired of the school now. The school has no one to help for finding the strange noise, but there’s one boy vary brave and his name was Mike the pro. At night time, he going to the basement room and he hear the strange noises are coming form the toilet. He was coming toward to the toilet but when he opened the door, he saw nothing. And when he was frighten of the spirit, he coming out of the toilet but the noise was start over again. He looked again in the toilet but there’s a strange face with white face. The ghost finger nails are full of bloody. And the ghost wearied a white cloth with his body hang on the rope.
“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH,” Mike screamed.
Then he ran away from the school and when he coming back. He put the camera on the chair and he start to asking some question.
“What do you want? Where are you from? Why are you staying here,” Mike asked.
So he coming back to his home and saw the movie.
“I want to kill my father, I want to kill him, he’s killing me when I just 4 years old, where is he? And I want all of u guys leave me alone, I don’t want anyone else on my place” the ghost answered.
So Mike told the new principal about what happen and show the movie. Suddenly, the principal trust Mike and now the school had no one there.

3 comments:

Mr.Sak+Sua said...

your story ..... so short!!! SAK SUA

bookgirl said...

yes very short THANK YOU!!!

TheDylans said...

Your story isn't bad, but it so short, you must chang the style and gramma. good luck to you